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第四部分：写作(共两节，满分35分)
71． 短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Three years ago I fail an important exam in my life and became a student in a ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patiently. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided make the best of it. I worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmate. Whenever I had difficulties, you were always available. Soon I became one of the most best students in my class.
My experience tells me that it’s not what you are given and how you make use of it which determines who you are.
 

72．书面表达
Human Flesh Search—thousands of individuals working to find and make public someone’s personal information, mostly online—will be ruled as leaking personal data, which is against the law, according to China’s top court.
Internet users or network service providers who leak people’s personal information such as phone numbers, addresses, and clinical data will have to hold legal responsibility.
Network service providers will also be held responsible if they are aware that their users have violated others’ rights but have failed to take action.
The decision comes after years of arguments over whether it’s right for the public to try those who behave wrongly.
On the one hand, cyber hunting does have its positive influences. Some public officials have been removed from their positions after human flesh searches led to corruption investigations. During disasters like the Sichuan earthquake in 2008, the search method also helped many people to find their loved ones.
But many think that online cyber hunting is creating a threat to privacy. “People’s ‘unusually high enthusiasm’ makes the human flesh search engine phenomenon unique,” Xujun Eberlein, a Chinese American author and commentator, told Forbes. “Participants often ‘reach out their hands’ thoughtlessly, violating people’s rights instead of being righteous(正直).”
【写作内容】
1. 以约30个词概括短文大意；
2. 以约120个词就“Human Flesh Search（人肉搜索）”这一主题谈谈你的看法，内容包括：
1）你是否赞同文章提及的“禁止人肉搜索”的法案，请说明你的理由；
2）“网络时代，个人隐私如何才能得到保障？”请就此问题，提出你的建议（至少两点）。
【写作要求】
1. 可以参照阅读材料内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

参考答案
1-20 ABCAC  ABCBC  ACBAA  BCABC
21-23 DBC
24-27 ABDA
28-31 ADCA
32-35 DCBC
36-55 DBACA   ABCBA  DADDA  BBCCD
56．handle / manage
57．Types / Kinds
58．changes
59．Social
60．interested
61．concern
62．trouble / difficulty
63．independent
64．influence / impact / effect
65．responding
66．F   67．E   68．G   69．C   70．A
71．【小题1】fail—failed
【小题2】a – an
【小题3】disappointing—disappointed
【小题4】patiently—patient
【小题5】make 前加to
【小题6】classmate—classmates
【小题7】you—they
【小题8】去掉most
【小题9】and—but
【小题10】which—that
72．The article announces that new laws are to be put out to suspend the Human Flesh Search. Public opinions toward this decision vary, some showing approval while others objection.
Personally, I am convinced that a ban on the human flesh search is essential. Although the human flesh search has indeed exposed some bad guys and their wrong doings, it is court rather than individuals that is to take the responsibility to do the trial. Despite their good intentions, what these cyber hunters do is both immoral and illegal, which can greatly endanger individuals and the whole society.
Therefore, it is high time immediate and positive measures should be adopted to address the problem. Firstly, the government must make relevant regulations and laws to protect people’s online privacy. In addition, all people should enhance the awareness of the importance of privacy protection. To avoid unwanted attention, it’s better for us to make personal information only available to friends. Only in these ways can we ensure network security.
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